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Nuezen's avatar

Absolutely beautiful, Joyce. You will get my recommendation. Keep it up. 🙏😊

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you very much, Nuezen 💙🙏💫

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Douglas Lloyd Peck's avatar

Very beautifully written and full of comforting and relatable word pictures (and a great photo). I would like to include "Twilight's Mauve" in Crown Valley Quarterly, my showcase for authors, painters, photographers and other artists (especially new ones). Take a peek - if you would like any changes I'll make them immediately: https://crownvalleyquarterly.wordpress.com/2024/06/07/twilights-mauve/

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Joyce's avatar

Oh my goodness, Douglas, what a wonderful idea. Thank you so much. Took a peek and it’s lovely.

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Ross Ion Coyle's avatar

Stunning! I love it. Twilight is a truly magical time. ❤️🙏

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you so much, Ross. You’re right, it is a magical time 💙🙏💫

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The Black Knight's avatar

This was exquisite!

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Knight. Much appreciated :o)

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Tracy's avatar

Beautiful. I hope you enjoy your yoga time!

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Tracy. Oh I love this yoga immersion, I’d almost say life changing 💙🙏💫

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Jenn's avatar

Fantastic, Joyce, what a lovely cozy, serene twilight poem ❤️

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you so much, Jenn 💙🙏💫

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Jenn's avatar

You’re so welcome! ❤️

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Ayesha A.'s avatar

Nice and lovely!

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Ayesha 💙🙏💫

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Julie Dee's avatar

Beautiful x

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Julie 💙🙏💫

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Jacqueline Rendell's avatar

sigh......it's so beautifully peaceful. ❤️

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Joyce's avatar

Thsnk you so much, Jacqueline 💙🙏💫

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Jacqueline Rendell's avatar

Namaste, Joyce! Have a wonderfully restorative time with yourself unplugged! ❤️

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Joyce's avatar

Thanks, Jacqueline 💙🙏💫💤

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Deborah T. Hewitt's avatar

Beautiful twilight poem to put one into a peaceful sleep! Have an amazing time on your retreat! It's good to take time off. oxox

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Joyce's avatar

Aww, dear Deborah, thank you so much for your lovely comments xoxo

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Beautiful, Joyce. Have a wonderful retreat.

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Heidi 💙🙏💫

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Daniel Henderson's avatar

This was a calming reading experience. I always found Twilight to be a sort of refuge tucked into the day for us to just rest and dream, if only for a bit. Your poem captures so much of my feelings into words it's crazy!

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you for such lovely comments, Daniel 💙🙏💫

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Morpheus, cradle me deep

My mind's turmoil denies rest

I try to still for night's sleep

But futile yet is that quest

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Joyce's avatar

A lovely poem, thank you, AC 💙💫🙏

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Inspired by yours (and a sleepless night a couple days ago caused by computer issues).

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Solarah's avatar

Enjoy your retreat!!!! This was so beautiful…as always 🙏🏾🤗✨

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Solarah 💙🙏💫

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David Smith's avatar

Beautiful imagery evoked thanks for sharing…

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, David 💙🙏💫

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Elliot Murray's avatar

Amazing 🙏💜🙏

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Elliot 💙🙏💫

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Elliot Murray's avatar

May pleasure as always, Joyce 🙏💜🙏Keep up the great work!

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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, I will 💙

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