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Makes me yearn for night so I can dream again. Beautifully written.

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Thank you, Monica. It’s no surprise that twilight and night are my favourite times of day. They allow for that gentle sleep and sweet dreams.

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Joyce, I loved this. A dreamlike lullaby which echoes throughout eternity. The voice of a soul caught between worlds, longing to remain in an ethereal state. Really amazing! Thank you for that experience. 🙏👍✨

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Oh my goodness, VP, what a lovely comment. Thank you so much 💙🙏💫

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Saying this poem is beautiful doesn’t do it justice, Joyce.

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Awww thank you so much, Rod. That is so very kind of you 💙🙏💫

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This poem makes me feel optimistic due to how it’s written, even with the image.

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Thank you, mpoetry, for your kind comment 💙🙏💫

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That's really beautiful. Dreams are absolutely fascinating and the things they show us can be very powerful. I've always believed that when you see someone this vividly while you sleep, and you can even feel their touch, it's because your consciousnesses have connected, and you are together in that moment, in some other place. Whether they truly are glimpses of something real, or just things our minds conjure on their own, I'm not sure, but there is definitely a lot more going on with them than we fully understand... 😎

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You’re so spot on, Chris. Thank you 🙂

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Joyce, this is so lovely, hypnotic almost. It well captures the disappointment of an interrupted dream.

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Thank you, dear Jenn, for your kind words 💙🙏💫

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You are quite welcome! ❤️

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Dreaming of the dawn,

Dream a dream of hopeful glow,

Fly - future is now!

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Thank you so much, Knight. That’s lovely!

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Great poem!

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Thank you, Harun 💙🙏💫

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This lifts my spirits, Joyce! ✨

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Aww thank you, Trudi 💙🙏💫

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Peaceful. It reads like a soft lullaby. Thank you, Joyce.

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Thank you, CJ 💙🙏💫

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Oh my, you are so welcome, Joyce!

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this one lightens the day

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Thank you, Rolando 💙🙏💫

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Thank you so much for that poem. It brought such a light to me day. I know that feeling so well.

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Ah, thank you, Teàrlach. So pleased it resonated with you 💙🙏💫

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A light shower of delicate words, like melting snowflakes, on a sultry night. Lovely poetry, Joyce, good work! 🙏💜🙏

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Why thank you, Elliot, for such kind words. Much appreciated 💙🙏💫

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Another gem!

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Thank you so much, Ross

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Thank you Joyce for some much needed beauty 💚

Beat the drum and let the poets speak.

This is the day of purification for those who

Are already mature and initiated into what love is.

"No Room for Form" ~ Rumi

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Shukran habeebti Carina 💙🙏💫

Come sempre sei molto gentile. Grazie mille 🥰

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Afwan Joyce 💚 grazie anche 🙏😍

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