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Ayesha Falak's avatar

Strong ending! I love how Jean reclaims her power. The red button detail is a nice touch - symbolic of moving forward and stopping the negativity.

Joyce's avatar

That is spot on what I meant. Thank you, Ayesha

Monica P.'s avatar

I ditto what Ayesha, Perry and Heidi said. Really wonderful!!!

Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Monica 💙🙏💫

Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

This has a wonderful flow through conflict and a reclaiming of power. Love it.

Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Heidi. Much appreciated

Deborah T. Hewitt's avatar

Yesss! Jean moves on! 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻

Joyce's avatar

Thanks, Deborah 💙🙏💫

Julie Dee's avatar

🔥 and if there’s not a party waiting, YOU start it!

Joyce's avatar

You got it! 👍

Jenn's avatar

Yeah! Good for you, Jean. Guys like that don’t deserve an older model. Great story, Joyce ❤️

Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Jenn 💙🙏💫

Jenn's avatar

You’re welcome!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Oh wow, I didn't know you do Fiction as well. What a nice surprise. This covers a lot of ground in a very short amount of time. It's almost like a condensed novel! I'm looking forward to seeing more... 😎

Joyce's avatar

Thanks, Chris. Every now and again there’s a surprise 🙂

Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Jean, superwoman! Creepy doc... The touch of a red button and enter ... party! Liked the ending, what a strong lady. Gone are the days of slamming down the phone receiver. Great to see more from you Joyce!

Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Pilgrim. Much appreciated

Carina Malatesta's avatar

This reminded me of the First Wive's Club 🥰, love that movie! 🎵 Sisters Are Doin’ It For Themselves 🎵

Joyce's avatar

Oh yes, that was a great movie. 💙

Carina Malatesta's avatar

🩷 now I want to view it again 🥰

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Very thorny. Lots of us "trade-ins" out there.

Joyce's avatar

Yes, *sighs.

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

And your implication that Jean has traded HIM in fits nicely.

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May 1, 2024
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Joyce's avatar

Thank you, Perry. I couldn’t agree more!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Well there's many a good tune played on an old fiddle, as they say! Haha... 😎